Review - I won this e-book from a give-away. This is a short story containing around 98 pages, and I wonder if the author is using this as a launchpad to judge her audience before writing more. The ending does leave potential for more stories.
I found the beginning a bit muddling as the chapters were very short and jumped around. Anissa was in one place on the run and then suddenly she was back 'home' with Laura, her Mum. I got the gist once Florence, (a boy, yes, that confused me - a name usually associated with a girl), stayed on the scene. Florence comes from Iwishacana, another realm/world where wishes come true but all the people have microchips in their heads. Anissa has managed to cross into this realm wearing a ring and is able to bring others (Florence) back into her world. I felt the author tried to pack too much into too few pages which did not allow for enough character development and scene setting. This caused some confusion, particularly in the beginning. Mention is made of Derek, Anissa's brother and also her father but we know very little about them. These were not the only characters who were glossed over. The story has great potential and I can see that it could be developed further and perhaps another book or a series could be written. 3*